So, I figure a good way to get me motivated to get as much work done as possible on the novel - which would equal getting it done sooner - is to start a weekly progress report, where I can sum up the work I’ve done the previous week. Pretty simple concept, eh? Ever thursday(ish) (Yeah, yeah. The first one’s already late. Figures, eh?). you’ll get a glimpse of just how much Rowan’s story has moved forward.

Since this is the first time around, though, I think it probably makes the most sense to start at the beginning and fill you all in on the progress I’ve made since first starting to conceptualize the story back in August of ‘07.

Currently I’ve finish The short prologue, 6 chapters and a short interlude, all of which together equal roughly 19k words. I expect the novel will clock in at around 30-40 chapters, as long as things move ahead as I think they will (yeah right…) which, if we do the math:

6 Chapters / 19,000 words = 3167 words/chapter
35 (average) chapters * 3167 words = 110,845 words

So, 110k words or, assuming 250 words/page, 443 pages. A modest total, falling smack into the middle of the 90-120k range that publishers seem to be attracted to these days. Of course this number’s a bit of a shot in the dark, things change and not every chapter is going to fall into the 3167 ballpark. Even now, only a few chapters in, the length of those varies broadly.

I think one of the worst things an author can do to their readers, especially a first time Fantasy writer, is to greet them with massive prologues/first chapters just chock-a-block full of exposition setting up the story. So I’ve attempted to ease the reader into the story, exploring and introducing the characters and the concepts in an increasingly more in depth manner. I don’t expect the chapters to get much longer than Chapter 6 and in many cases, just taking a look at the outline, some should be even be shorter than that 3000 average

Here’s a little breakdown of the chapters thus far:

Prologue

This is a short, snappy introduction to the protagonist, Rowan Hayes, and sets up what is a crucial plot element for the story: Rowan’s Child. I’ve spent a fair amount of time working on the prologue (I workshopped it in a college course, so it has gone through several revisions) and, though one of my readers didn’t care for the chapter, I’m still debating on whether or not I should really open the novel with it, or whether it should just come later on in the narrative to fill in some blanks.

Chapter 1

This chapter starts with a bang and introduces the reader right away to the main conflict in the story: Rowan’s missing son, Lewis. The first ticklings of the Fey world and magic appear in this chapter, though it lingers in the background of the main action. I tried to stuff a lot of emotion into this chapter, and I’m hoping there’s also enough mystery and conflict to intrigue the reader right off the bat.

Chapter 2

This is very much a character building and set up chapter. We see Rowan struggling with the loss of her son (and the police’s mysterious/incompetent lack of help in finding him) and it starts to become clear that Rowan is a fiery and reckless young woman, not always necessarily thinking through all the decisions she makes in her life, relying more on her heart than her head. We learn a lot about Rowan’s early life (the death of her mother and the fallout it caused between her and the rest of her family) and I think it sets the stage for not only who Rowan is. One of those family members, her sister Allie, features strongly in this chapter, and acts as a foil to Rowan (levelheaded, tidy and complacent) and helps bring out and define Rowan’s flaws in a way that will attract the reader to her. Hopefully.

Chapter 3

This was a fun chapter to write, but also easily the most time consuming and difficult yet. The main reason for this is that it’s the first time where I really have to convince the reader that I know what I’m talking about when it comes to real world Ireland. Many parts of my novel, including this entire chapter, take place in real locations, and I have to get the facts straight, otherwise (my no doubt astute) readers will catch me. I spent nearly an hour online trying to figure out if a particular DART station (Dublin Area Rapid Transit, a train that carries commuters from one end of Dublin to the other) was on one side of a particular mountain tunnel or another. A small factor in the story, but one that has to be accurate, just in case someone decides to check up on it.

Robin Hobb once said something along the lines of, “If you want people to believe in your dragons, you have to make them believe in your Rabbits first.” This is something that I try to hold true to as much as possible. You have to give your reader a reason to trust what you have to say. If they don’t believe me when I’m telling them about Dublin, there’s no way they’ll believe me when I’m telling them about the Fey World.

The Devil’s in the details, as they say.

Chapter 4

This chapter’s special to me for a few reasons. Back in ’05 I spent a few months in Europe, travelling around with nothing more than my backpack and my girlfriend. We were young, and grew more in those few months than we had in years before. It’s safe to say that that trip shaped a lot of who I would become in the next few years. It really taught me to take a step back and look at life in a more relaxed, contemplative manner. It calmed me down and showed me how to truly appreciate the little things in life. It helped me appreciate home, family and the small things in a way I wasn’t aware of before. It opened my eyes to the world.

Chapter Four brings Rowan to Bray, a small town on the outskirts of County Dublin, and a place that I hold dear. I spent a month in Ireland during my travels, much of which used Bray as a home base (my uncle lived there at the time) and during my tenure it really started to feel like home. It seemed a no-brainer to start Rowan’s Ireland adventure (and later the Fey world) in Bray, there’s just so much history around the area that it’s just ripe for telling the story I’m looking to tell.

Of course the novel moves away from Bray pretty quickly (by the end of the next chapter, for that matter), but there wasn’t a chance I was going to leave out my Irish home from the telling of Rowan’s story.

Interlude

This is a fun little psuedo-chapter (just a few hundred words) switching things up and telling the story through the eyes of one of the other major secondary characters, a grumpy Leprechaun named Fitheal. He’s a riot to write about and I’m sure my readers will love him when they get to chance to meet him.

The interesting thing about this Interlude is that it’s told in 3rd-person narrative as opposed to 1st-person narrative, as the rest of the story is told. This is the first of a few little Interludes like this that I expect to pop up throughout the book.

I’m playing with the idea of giving this Interlude a good edit and releasing it here as a sample of my work sometime down the road. That’s of course if people want to read it!

Chapter 5

This was a fun chapter to work on, but also one that ended up being much longer than I had anticipated. It sees Rowan having to flee Bray, in the middle of a dark, stormy night (yay clichés!) and led by a very unreliable creature that, to her mind, really shouldn’t even exist.

The important thing for me was to inject a lot of tension into the this chapter; it’s the first time that Rowan (and the reader) realize just what type of trouble she’s in. It’s also the first chapter where the Fey world plays a strong, direct role and I’m hoping that I’ve done enough to intrigue the reader about the world into which Rowan’s about to throw herself. Her perception of myth and reality is really thrown into question with this chapter and I hope the reader’s will be, too.

Chapter 6

This is mostly a continuation of Chapter 5, but this time around I get to play around with a lot of real world locations, concepts and historical figures, throwing in my own little spin on them, and making them suddenly much more viable in a Contemporary Fantasy. Rowan meets several figures from that all reader’s will be very familiar with through the story, and use them in ways that will make the reader excited to meet them again.

I think the reader will begin to get a good sense of how Rowan deals with conflict. Rowan’s got a lot of problems, she’s gone through a lot in her life and has developed certain ways of dealing with conflict that I’m not sure everyone will agree with. It’s interesting, even for me as the author, to watch her develop and react as her life tumbles more and more out of control.

Rowan’s relationship with the irascible little leprechaun, Fitheal, really starts to develop here and I think it’ll be an interesting one to watch. Rowan can never really be sure what to think of the little guy and where his intentions may lie. Regardless of this, though, she has little choice (due to events in Chapter 4) but to follow the little bugger and hope he won’t lead her astray.

This chapter ends with Rowan setting foot for the first (but definitely not the last!) time in the Fey world and ends on a strong note with Rowan face to face with a very real, very lethal, creature of Faerie.

Phew! *wipes forehead*I applaud anyone who actually made it through all of that! Hopefully you’ve got a better idea of where I’m going with the story and what Rowan has ahead of her. I’m actually about halfway through Chapter 8 (which is the last chapter in what amounts to, essentially, the first act of the novel), but I’ll save a write up about Chapter 7 for next time. Each of these little write ups were obviously pretty brief and you can expect a more indepth, thoughtful dissection of the writing of future chapters as they come up.