Chapter Nine
My Novel, Progress Reports May 9th, 2008I actually finished Chapter Nine a little while ago (currently halfway through Chapter Ten at the moment), but got so caught up in writing, publishing the excerpt (read it!) and starting a redesign of the web site that I forgot to write about it! Well, it’s a slow day at work and I figure it’s finally time to get caught up on the progress report.
Chapter Nine, titled Four Leaf Clovers and Bended Grass, turned out to be the longest chapter yet, weighing in at a respectable 4011 words. I wasn’t really planning for this to happen, but as the chapter wore on I realised just how much needed to be accomplished and it lengthened. I feel confident that despite the increase in word count, I still managed to create a chapter full of interesting situations, solid pacing and good dialogue
Chapter Nine begins the second act of the novel and sees Rowan back in our world, but having to deal with the fact that she’s very much aware that another world exists out there, her son is still missing, and she’s meant to find someone she has no idea how to find. In a lot of ways I get to take some of the ideas that have been floating around Epic Fantasy – A missing son, an alternate world, magical creatures, a sense of discovery and wonder – and play with them in a new light, getting to put my own spin on things and (hopefully) making a lot of it seem fresh again.
Of course, by no means would I call Through Bended Grass an epic story, quite the opposite actually. Through Bended Grass is a story about people, about relationships (both internal and external), about discovery and, maybe most importantly, about family. It’s not about a quest to destroy an evil-something-or-other (though a certain antagonist certainly tries to fill that role), it’s not even about “good vs. evil”, but rather about the shades of grey found throughout the world. I know that’s a cliche at this point, but I still think it’s an integral part of writing a good novel, Fantasy or otherwise.
One character, who is introduce in this chapter, has surprised me a lot by how much he’s become involved in the story. When I was in the early planning stages he had a single, small role to play and then more or less disappeared. But then I started writing about him, discovering his history and what brought him to where he is during the story, and I began to realize how important he is to Rowan’s story. His role has expanded since then and I expect that by the end of the novel it will have expanded even more. Anymore about him would be spoiler territory, but I certainly can’t wait for my readers to meet him and continue to learn about him just as I have.
Chapter Nine turned out to be a hefty chapter, but I think it adds a lot to the novel and manages to keep up a good pace. The start of Rowan’s real journey begins with this chapter and it doesn’t let down with the wonder, discovery and action until the end of the novel.
May 9th, 2008 at 12:05 pm
Thats the rub of being an aspiring writer, Aidan. All these people and events that you can’t wait for “your readers” to come across, but wait you shall. What would we be looking at (not as familiar with the industry as are some) best case scenario 2 years if everything broke just right for you? 10, if you struggle to find a home? As many many great authors have. And that doesn’t even take into account the time to finish the book and then polish it to a glowing shine.
May 13th, 2008 at 12:45 pm
Chapter Nine sounds like it would be a lot of fun when you reach it in the overall story. I’d be very interested to see how Rowan deals with all the issues at hand. Reading your description of it, I imagined a young woman walking around town, eyes wide, her perceptions of everything being changed. Kind of like the scene in The Matrix when they take Neo to see the Oracle.
Only without Keanue Reeves. Or Cars. Or Trench Coats. Or… never mind.
Anyway, I did like how the title of the chapter connects with the title of the story - interesting considering the conversations that have been going on about titles lately.