Progress report: Week whatever.
My Novel, Progress Reports June 4th, 2008Jeez, where to start.
I haven’t posted one of these progress reports in a while. Why? Because I’ve been writing so damn much…
Chapter 10 and 11 are done and dusted. Actually, they’ve been done for a couple of weeks now and I’m currently hard at work on Chapter 12, which is proving to be the most difficult to write chapter yet. I’ll speak on that later, when the chapter is done, and instead I’ll just let you know that Chapter 10 & 11 were a blast to write and came quickly. I probably spent less than half the amount of time writing them combined than I’ve spent on Chapter 12 so far.
Why so fast?
Simply put, they wrote themselves. Chapter 10 was interesting for me because I was able to explore a part of Ireland I’m very familar with (and rather fond of), but through the eyes of a character that is very much aware that there’s a whole other world existing just beneath the surface. The whole chapter leads towards a violent confrontation between Rowan and a faerie creature with rather nefarious intentions. It was an interesting challenge for me to write such a dark chapter in a setting that I have nothing but fond memories of.
Chapter 11 was fun for a totally different reason. Rowan once again steps away from our world back into the world of Faerie and it’s always a pleasure to explore it with her. I’m not a hugely descriptive writer, I tend to believe that the characters should tell the story and the readers deserve the benefit of the doubt when it comes to imagining the world it takes place in. Of course, this doesn’t mean I don’t use description (as you all know from reading the excerpt!) and this chapter was one that really allowed me to test my abilities to paint a picture in the mind of the readers. Rowan travels into a weird world and I hope that everyone reading the novel feels like they’re right there alongside her.
One thing I made a conscious decision about before I started writing Through Bended Grass was that, despite drawing heavily from the history and lore of our world, that I wouldn’t let myself be tied down by that same lore. I want room to wriggle around in what’s already been established and give it my own spin, to make my mark on the lore without taking any self agrandizing liberties. It’s certainly a fine line to walk, but also a fun one.
As a bit of an aside, I think Chapter 10 would make a good excerpt, giving readers a taste of what the story’s like later on in the novel without giving away too much. It’s not going to happen right away, but if people really want it, I’ll consider it.
Now, back to Chapter 12, it needs all my attention!
June 5th, 2008 at 9:01 am
Aidan,
Very cool! Sounds like the chapters would be an interesting read. Post one up!
I feel your pain with Chapter 12. I’m currently writing Chapter 14 in my little shtick and it’s proven to be the hardest by far. I’ve split the story up into “parts” and the first one basically being back story, but this chapter is the “end game” for the first part, so it’s proven quite challenging.
Stick with it!!!
Mark
June 5th, 2008 at 10:37 am
Incubus,
I expect I’ll get one of these chapters up on the web in the next few weeks. Either one of them would make a good excerpt, but I’ll have to take the time to decide which one I’d rather put out to the public and which one I’d rather spend the time editing right now.
As an aside, you mention that the first “part” of your story is basically back story. This worries me. If there’s been one thing I’ve been taught at all of the writing conferences I’ve been to, it’s to start the story at the start of the story, the history and backstory can come later. If you ask your readers to wade through a few chapters of setup before getting to the real conflict, you’re bound to lose a good chunk of them.
June 6th, 2008 at 9:02 pm
Aidan,
Good luck editing, I can’t wait to read another sample of the story.
I totally get what you’re saying about back story, but I think what I’m using the wrong words to describe it. It’s more of a time piece, the story starts when the two major characters are in school - think Harry Potter sort of; At the end of part one, they part ways, and part two picks up about five or ten years later.
Does that make sense?
So it’s not really backstory it’s more, “If you think that was crappy wait till you see them a little later. Their lives really suck now.