Chapter 15 - ‘Here Be Dragons’
Uncategorized July 12th, 2008Well that was quick.
After so bloody long without updates, it seems like I’m on a roll again. Chapter 15 titled Here Be Dragons is done and dusted. Hell, Chapter 16 is almost done, too.
Shawn Speakman (blog HERE) often speaks about hitting the homestretch of a novel, the point after the halfway mark and how it starts to feel like you’re going downhill from there and gaining momentum with every word. I beginning to understand what he means by that. After finishing off Chapter 14 and the interlude, that marked roughly the halfway point of the novel (about 46k words out of 90k) and also served as the climax for ‘Part One’ of the novel (despite what I said in the last post, this was actually the end of ‘Part One’ not ‘Part Two’…). It seems that since hitting that point, or even a few chapters earlier, when I finished off Chapter 12, the words have just been flowing out of me.
I may not exactly be able to see the finish line at the moment, it’s still a ways off, but I know that there is less in front of me than behind and that’s an encouraging thought. I find that the second-half of a good book is almost always a faster read than the first half, and I think it’s a good sign when the writing’s the same way.
Chapter 15 is a bit of a change of pace from 14 (which was balls to the wall), but it was challenging to write in its own part. Without giving too much away, the structure of the chapter jumps around a lot in time and answers some question posed at the end of 14 in (I think/hope) interesting ways. There’s also a lot of room for some neat imagery and it was a great way to explore some aspects of my version of the Fey lands.
One character in particular has really stepped out of the shadows and surprised me. He doesn’t appear in this chapter - in fact he doesn’t appear again for a few chapters - but I’m constantly surprised by how much he and his actions have rippled through the story. He was originally going to be a bit of a bit character, no more than a plot device, but as the writing has moved on he’s affecting more and more of the story and it’s even getting to the point where he (and his parallels to Rowan) will have a defined effect on the end of the novel.
Now, who said writing isn’t bloody exciting?
I outline in a pretty organic manner, but at the end of the day I have a solid outline for the novel and the first 18 or so chapters. It’s nice to know that even with all that outlining, I can still be surprised by the twists and turns of the story.
Well, onward to writing. Chapter 16 should be done pretty soon!
July 14th, 2008 at 7:37 am
Man, its stuff like this that gets me pumped up to keep working. I finished up Part One to my story in late June, and decided to print it all off and really “clean it up”, so far I’ve done nothing, and that’s important. But I don’t want to revise/edit, it want to write! But… Part One, proud of it as I am, is a complete mess, and there’s no telling how much I’ll change around. I don’t want to do rewrites to part two because I didn’t have a solid enough part one first, if that makes sense.
::Sigh::
Did you play The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess? The mail main always says “Onward to Mail!” whenever he drops a letter off for link… you’re last line got that stuck in my head now.
Congrats on the progress!
July 22nd, 2008 at 11:47 am
Glad to hear you are progressing right along. Keep up the hard work. I can tell you first hand there is no experience quite like officially writing “The End.”
You know that special pride and sense of accomplishment you get from a day of quality writing? Imagine that times infinity. Even tho you very well know “the End” is just another beginning, a beginning to a journey much longer and harder than writing ever was. It still one of the highlights of my life (getting ready to turn 28) a feeling that only other aspiring writers can empathise with, and only those who have finished a novel can truly understand.
Just as getting published is a feeling finished novelers can empathize, but only published authors could truly understand.
Good luck.
July 22nd, 2008 at 1:05 pm
Thanks Sean.
Knowing how satisfying it is just to finish a chapter, I can only imagine the feel when I can finally say the novel is done and dusted.
Doubly so because it’s a standalone and I won’t just be moving onto the sequel in a trilogy or series. I’ve already got a couple of ideas brewing in my head for novels after Through Bended Grass!