Comments on: Nearing the Finish Line http://aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword/2009/06/16/nearing-the-finish-line/ Aidan Moher's Words and Rambles on Writing. Fri, 26 Feb 2010 15:00:10 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Cory Gerleman http://aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword/2009/06/16/nearing-the-finish-line/comment-page-1/#comment-301 Cory Gerleman Tue, 18 Aug 2009 00:24:57 +0000 http://aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword/2009/06/16/nearing-the-finish-line/#comment-301 I've been following your blogs for a year or two now, and appreciate the work you put in. I like that I can get the goods on what's happening in the genre without doing any of the work myself! Anyway, I thought I'd offer my set of eyes once you finish your book. I'm not an editor, or anything of importance in the publishing world. Truth be told, I'm a computer programmer. But I love reading fantasy, and your blog has surely whetted my appetite; you're novel sounds very interesting. I'd be more than willing to give my thoughts on a macro level, and even provide some micro-insights where warranted. No line-by-line critique... just an honest reader's impression and reaction. If that interests you, let me know when you're done and I'd be happy to help. Thanks, and good luck! I’ve been following your blogs for a year or two now, and appreciate the work you put in. I like that I can get the goods on what’s happening in the genre without doing any of the work myself!

Anyway, I thought I’d offer my set of eyes once you finish your book. I’m not an editor, or anything of importance in the publishing world. Truth be told, I’m a computer programmer. But I love reading fantasy, and your blog has surely whetted my appetite; you’re novel sounds very interesting. I’d be more than willing to give my thoughts on a macro level, and even provide some micro-insights where warranted. No line-by-line critique… just an honest reader’s impression and reaction. If that interests you, let me know when you’re done and I’d be happy to help.

Thanks, and good luck!

]]> By: Tom Swift http://aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword/2009/06/16/nearing-the-finish-line/comment-page-1/#comment-299 Tom Swift Sat, 08 Aug 2009 21:51:21 +0000 http://aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword/2009/06/16/nearing-the-finish-line/#comment-299 Congratulations on nearly finishing, those last couple of chapters really are the most fun to get out, although i had to go through them with a fine comb to check out corny dialogue. Playing too many videogames has conditioned me to abandon the good dialogue you've stuck too and start sticking in 'dramatic monologues'. And thats never good. Congratulations on nearly finishing, those last couple of chapters really are the most fun to get out, although i had to go through them with a fine comb to check out corny dialogue.
Playing too many videogames has conditioned me to abandon the good dialogue you’ve stuck too and start sticking in ‘dramatic monologues’.
And thats never good.

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