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		<title>Short Story &#124; Whisperwind</title>
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Whisperwind


If the city of Marrakech is a living beast, Djemaa El-Fna is its heart. It is known as The Assembly of the Dead in my tongue, and no name suits it better. A vast plaza, edged on one side by the souk, the labyrinthine markets of Marrakech, it is home to snake charmers and merchants [...]]]></description>
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<h2>Whisperwind</h2>
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<p>If the city of Marrakech is a living beast, <em>Djemaa El-Fna</em> is its heart. It is known as The Assembly of the Dead in my tongue, and no name suits it better. A vast plaza, edged on one side by the <em>souk</em>, the labyrinthine markets of Marrakech, it is home to snake charmers and merchants of spice and story, ill-kept monkeys chained to their eager pimps, tourists easily plied from their money and locals eager to part them from it.</p>
<p><em>Djemaa El-Fna</em> is a wondrous sight, and I love it still, though I have not returned since I was first stolen from its streets. The whispers of its stories are sweet nothings in my ear, as the charming chaos of the <em>souk</em>’s stalls and the milling crowd of <em>Djemaa El-Fna</em> beckons me back to the haunts of my childhood. Those streets were the only parents I had, other orphans my only siblings.</p>
<p>It was in the maelstrom crowd of <em>Djemaa El-Fna</em> that I first found Whisperwind, or, rather, where she first found me. I would not know the importance of that day for many years to come. Even now, I do not understand that first meeting.</p>
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<p>A young girl wandered through <em>Djemaa El-Fna</em>, a foreigner with ivory skin and black hair flowing out from beneath a wide-brimmed hat. She looked lost.</p>
<p>I didn’t care. I cared only about him.</p>
<p>Though dark of skin, my mark stood out worse than a fat, sunburned American. Despite the angry sun and the endlessly swirling dust devils, he was dressed in an suit. A suit that spoke of money. The price on his sunglasses alone could probably feed me and my brothers for a week. He could not hide his foreign body language behind that dark skin. I could see through it no problem, just like any of my brothers could. Easy prey, no? I followed him with my eyes, never losing sight as I lounged in the shadows cast by a vendor’s stall on the edge of the <em>souk</em>, the perfect place to ply my trade.</p>
<p>You might think there’s no pride in being a pickpocket. I’d say you’re wrong. We work hard, regardless of honour. I’d take food in my belly over pride in my heart any day. Wouldn’t you?</p>
<p>Working in the gangs wasn’t always easy, but it was better than being alone. You wouldn’t last long on your own. I was middle of the pack in my gang, just where I wanted to be. You have to find that balance, be useful to the gang, but not draw too much attention from those stronger than you, from those who’ll take you out if you’re a threat. I could be better, I could be at the top, if they knew about my power, but I liked it in the middle, it was safe.</p>
<p>He was moving, and fast. Chewing on a <em>brochette</em>, he left the food vendor’s stall. He scanned the crowd, searching for the next lucky fool who’d get a taste of his western money. Any luck and it’d be me, and he’d be parting with more of it than he was hoping. As I guessed, he started towards the <em>souk</em>, hoping to take in the sights and sounds of Marrakech’s biggest market.</p>
<p>He passed by my spot of shade, so close I could have reached out and grabbed the leg of his pants. I waited a moment, so he wouldn’t see me, then stood and followed him into the mess of stalls and the ebb and flow of people flowing through the veins of my city. The thick smell of steaming food mixed with the endless dust of the market, a heady mixture as comforting to me as the hug of any mother. I would welcome the man to my home the only way I knew how.</p>
<p>“Stop.” The voice was soft and childlike, but pitched just right to drift out from the cacophony of vendor’s catcalls, grilling food, angry bartering, shrieking monkeys and the raucous yells of wild-eyed transvestite dancers. A chill climbed my spine, and I stopped and turned to the young girl, who was hiding in the cotton drapes of a pottery stall. Her skin was white as the finest porcelain, yet her hair was dark as mine. Her face and eyes were lost in the shadows of her hat. Still, I could feel the chill of her gaze. A foreigner, but she spoke my language as if she was born to it.</p>
<p>“Do not,” she said, pointing toward my rapidly disappearing mark.</p>
<p>I turned and ran. I told myself, as I ran, that I didn’t want to lose my mark. That was a lie. I ran from her.</p>
<p>The man wound deeper through the <em>souk</em>. Most tourists enter and take their time, stopping at each vendor to catch their eye, trying on fake Nikes or getting high on <em>majoun</em>. This man, though, moved through the stalls like a local, like he knew where he was going.</p>
<p>I had trouble keeping up with him. He would disappear from sight, lost behind clouds of steam, or amongst a throng of shoppers, but around every twist and turn I would catch a further glimpse before losing him again. An uneasy feeling was tickling the back of my neck, like hidden eyes were watching from every shadow. We were near the outskirts of the <em>souk</em> now, away from the cloth stalls and back within the garden of stone buildings.</p>
<p>I called on the power within me, my little bit of magick, and wrapped myself in the calming thrum of its energy. The power came to me naturally as breathing. It pulsed with every beat of my heart and danced along the tips of my fingers, a cerulean flame invisible to others. It was my one bargaining chip in life.</p>
<p>With that power flowing through my veins, I did not fear the man. I pushed harder through the crowds, keeping him just at the edge of sight.</p>
<p>I could hardly believe when he turned the corner, heading into a quiet alley. I knew that turn, that alley, every one of my brothers did. Our gang used it as a drop spot, to ambush rival gangs or intimidate unsuspecting tourists.</p>
<p>Why would he go there? I wondered, swallowing the unease that swarmed just under the buzz of my magick. Who is he? I thought of turning back, of giving up on the mark. Someone else could have him. Or maybe I should go back, get some of my brothers, find the man again. We could share the profits.</p>
<p>I thought about it, but I didn’t listen. I don’t know why. I was greedy, I guess.</p>
<p>I hauled myself up onto the roof of one of the buildings that lined the alley. My brothers and I had long since established a series of hiding spots among the rooftops of the <em>souk</em>, hidden from anyone who did not know where to look.</p>
<p>The flat roof was empty except for one corner, where a tarp-covered bundle lay in the shadows cast by the sun. It contained simple tools and weapons, anything my brothers might need for a job. If I could quietly get behind the man in the suit, he’d be out before he even knew I was there. I’d have to be quick, though.</p>
<p>I knew there was a club there, a splintered baseball bat. We didn’t like to hurt the foreigners we robbed &#8212; it upset the balance in the <em>souk</em> and <em>Djemaa El-Fna</em> &#8212; but sometimes exceptions had to be made. It was safer than using my magick. I pulled back the tarp. The club was gone. All the things were gone.</p>
<p>Gravel crunched behind me, and I swung about, startled.</p>
<p>“Do not,” she said, pointing down to the alley. “He is a bad man. He will take you.”</p>
<p>The girl was standing in the middle of the roof. Her skin was flawless, a blazing beacon even against the sun-bleached horizon of Marrakech rooftops. Her hat was gone. She had the lifeless face of a doll. Her black eyes were like eerie pools of ink, and caught none of the sun’s harsh light. There was a wisdom in that stare that shook me deep.</p>
<p>She looked like a child, but she was not. She was older than this city, than the language I spoke. I can’t explain how I knew this. It was in the language of her body, in the words left unspoken on her lips. Her hands were enveloped in flame. The same magick that licked eagerly up my own arms.</p>
<p>A soft wind whipped the girl’s hair, whispering promises of what horrors lay in that alley below, at the hands of the man in the suit.</p>
<p>Again, I turned and ran. I dropped from the rooftop, landing hard on the street at the outskirts of the market. My knees buckled, but I scrambled back up. I ran as if Shaitan and all his demons were at my back. I fled for the safety of the <em>souk</em>, shoving through the crowds, leaving a trail of angry calls at my back, to find my brothers in <em>Djemaa El-Fna</em>.</p>
<div align="center">* * *</div>
<p>Many years would pass before I saw Whisperwind again, but that is a story for another day.</p>
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<p><small>Copyright &copy; Aidan Moher, 2010</small></div>
<p><strong>Whisperwind</strong> is another project I wrote for my creative writing class. What&#8217;s a bit more significant is that I used it to explore a couple of characters that have been floating around in my head, and connect heavily to my second (as yet unnamed) novel. I won&#8217;t say much, but you certainly haven&#8217;t seen the end of Whisperwind or the nameless boy.</p>


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		<title>Flash Fiction &#124; What We Left Behind</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Feb 2010 04:47:43 +0000</pubDate>
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What We Left Behind


And there he was. The rich American. The fat American. My Husband. My knight in shining armour.
&#160;&#160;&#160;Well, ‘shining’ maybe is not the best word. ‘Tarnished’. That is a better word. My knight in tarnished armour. Though, ‘knight’ is not the best word, also. I do not know a better one. It was [...]]]></description>
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<p>And there he was. The rich American. The fat American. My Husband. My knight in shining armour.
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Well, ‘shining’ maybe is not the best word. ‘Tarnished’. That is a better word. My knight in tarnished armour. Though, ‘knight’ is not the best word, also. I do not know a better one. It was his job to love me, to open up this new life, in this land of opportunity.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;He did not know my secret. And never will. God willing.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;My husband held a sign with my name on it. <em>Alexandra</em>. It was spelled wrong. Aleksandra. Alex, to my few friends back home in Ukrayina. No not home. Not any more. This was my home now, with this man. My husband. He had seen my photo, through the Internet, and I had seen his. Still, we were strangers to one another, strangers now linked at the hip.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Hello,” he said, his strange accent making a slur of the word.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Hello,” I said, pitching my voice high. He would expect it to be high and I was used to the charade. I did not know what else to say.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Let me git that for ye.” He reached down, one meaty hand grazing my ass, and grabbed the handle of my single bag of luggage. Its wheel was broken and it wobbled as he dragged it to the <em>taksi</em>, tossed it roughly into the trunk, without a care for my things.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Well, hurry up!” he said, gesturing to the open door of the yellow <em>taksi</em>. “We’ve got to get home ‘fore four. The Diamondbacks are playin’ tonight. Playin’ the fuckin’ Pirates. I ain’t gonna miss that game. You like baseball?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“I do not know it very well. We do not like the Pirates?” I said, and entered the <em>taksi</em>.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Fuckin’ assholes, the Pirates.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Hey! The Pirates ain’t so bad,” said the driver. I could see his eyes in the mirror. They were kind eyes. Naive eyes. He looked back at us, a cute smile on a crooked face. “My Pa’s from the Pitt.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;My husband did not say anything back. Just grunted and gave the man a slip of paper.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“42nd and third?” the driver said. He smiled at me, not my husband. Oh how his eyes glinted with good humour.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I looked to my husband, not knowing what to say.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Yah,” he said. “42nd and third, like it says on the damn paper.” My husband looked at me and rolled his eyes.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The driver gave me another of those knowing smiles. I was caught between the gazes of those two men. The <em>taksi</em> started moving.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;We were far from the airport when my husband spoke again. “So, girl. Tell me about yerself. Tell me everything.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I told him much during that car ride, for he was my husband. But I did not tell him everything.</p>
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<p>Just a fun little piece of Flash Fiction. It&#8217;s Romance week in my writing class and I was tasked with writing the first page of a Romance short story. I turned it into a somewhat self-contained piece of Flash fiction. What&#8217;s &#8216;her&#8217; secret? You probably don&#8217;t want to know. Neither does her husband.</p>


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		<title>Short Story &#124; &#8216;Piss and Vinegar&#8217;</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 18:36:37 +0000</pubDate>
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Piss and Vinegar


There wasn’t much evidence to go by, not enough for my liking at least. Just an empty club, the maelstrom remnants of a dried out party, a skinny girl, a fat man and a very dead body.
&#160;&#160;&#160;It wasn’t much, no, but I’d worked with less and come through the other end all right.
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<p>There wasn’t much evidence to go by, not enough for my liking at least. Just an empty club, the maelstrom remnants of a dried out party, a skinny girl, a fat man and a very dead body.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;It wasn’t much, no, but I’d worked with less and come through the other end all right.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The victim was tall and blonde, with a delicate face &#8212; handsome in a feminine, model<em>ish</em> sort of way. An Adonis. No signs of a struggle, but above his left breast, just visible through the open collar of his pink button-down shirt, was a welt, red and angry.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I knelt next to him and pulled open the shirt. It was more than just a welt. It had the hot, blistered look of a bad sunburn. More startling, it was shaped perfectly like a handprint, as though someone had given him a shove with a hand-shaped branding iron. There wasn’t a mark on him otherwise. I’d seen things on the streets of Prague that’d make your skin crawl. I’d never seen something like this.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A shadow fell over me, so I glanced up. A fat man in a damn expensive suit stood looking down, all piss and vinegar.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The fat man spoke. He was the owner of the place, rich as fuck and as polite as you’d expect of his sort. “I’ve got a group of <em>gentlemen</em> coming in tonight who’re worth more  than whatever shit town your mother raised you in. I don’t care who killed this <em>cizinec</em>. You’re going to make sure this place is open tonight, like none of this nonsense happened. I’ve got a reputation to keep.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“So do I,” I said. I didn’t tell him I was born in Prague, the same “shit town” that fed his gluttonous bank account. It wouldn’t do to make him angry, huh? At least not yet.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;By night the club was like any other in my city – a glitzy veneer of beautiful women, expensive drinks and lustful expressions painted with heavy strokes over top the reality of cocaine lines, high-class prostitution and fortunes lost and won through lucrative, alcohol-fueled foreign business deals. The Velvet Revolution had thrown my country from the pan into the fire, as they say, and sometimes it was hard to recognize it as the place I’d lived all my life. Still, it was better now. If you look at it from some certain angles. I guess.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Get it done,” the fat man said. “We’re opening those doors tonight.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You’re not concerned that somebody was killed here last night, in your club?” I said.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Get it done.” He walked away, towards a plain door that led to the bowels of the building. Before he left through the fluorescent glow of the doorway, he snapped at the young girl behind the bar, literally snapped his fingers at her, and pointed a blunt finger my way. “Help him,” he said.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;She glanced my way, a bland look on her face, then took off the apron wrapped round her slim waist. The owner of the club stomped off through the door and left us alone. Just me and the pretty lady.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You’re here about him?” she said, jabbing a thumb at the body.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;She was like any other girl that worked at a place like this – pretty face, but nothing special, made exotic by the pulsing, toxic light of the night club. Dressed to entice, but no false-promises. Dark hair and sharp features made her look Slavic, her accent confirmed it. Likely, she pulled in more cash on a good night than I made in a week. She knew it, too.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Yes. You were here last night?” I asked. Easier to treat her as a piece of evidence than a pretty girl. I’m a lonely aging bastard, and I don’t need my dying hormones distracting me.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“I might as well sleep in this shit hole,” she said.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Most people I knew couldn’t even afford to pay cover for a club like this. Shit hole, indeed. “So you were here?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Yeah. I’m always here.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You’re not from here, from Prague or the <em>Česká republika</em>.” I made it a statement more than a question.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Pavol brings girls in from every corner. We deal with an international clientele here.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You speak our language well. It’s not an easy one to wrap your tongue around.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“I’ve wrapped my tongue around much worse. I’ve been here a long time.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“How about him? Where was he from?” My turn to jab a finger at the victim.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Him? Tongue’s never been wrapped around any bit of him.” A damn devilish smile. “Blonde hair like that? Sweden. Norway, maybe?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;His wallet, which was in the breast pocket of his jacket when I first searched the body, had no ID, but there were a couple of Swiss-issued credit cards, a few thousand koruna, a handful of euros and (the girl had good instincts) Swedish krona.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You didn’t talk to him?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“No. Margaret had a pull on him all night. She made out like a bandit, ’fore he died, I guess.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Is she around? Margaret?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Do you see her? You’d notice if she were, a rack like that.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You know her cell number?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Surprisingly, she gave it to me. I rang the number, but got only voice mail. A quick message in Czech then a longer one in English. Sounded like she might be from Britain.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Not home?” the waitress asked.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“No. No answer.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Probably sleeping.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Probably,” I said, but made a mental note to visit her apartment after I left the club.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Awkward silence. Not something I was unfamiliar with in the realm of beautiful women.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“He was supposed to be an asshole,” she said, finally.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;He looked like an asshole. Soul-patch, but smooth-cheeked. Even in death he had that cocky smile reserved for the rich, young and beautiful.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Asshole enough that he’d get himself killed?” I asked.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“He’s got money, doesn’t he? Half the guys in here are a business move away from a bullet in the gut.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Drug dealer?” I asked. He didn’t look the type, but sometimes it was hard to tell.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“No. Clean as a whistle, if you ask Margaret. She’s always lookin’ for new clients. Especially when they’ve got money like him.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You didn’t see anything last night?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“No. I found him dead here, this morning.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“I need to talk to Margaret.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Yeah. Probably you do.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You mind if I poke around?”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“No. Pavol might.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“If I run into him, I’ll ask.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Suit yourself.”</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;She went back to whatever it is a pretty girl in a bar does before the doors open. People were coming to claim the body, run some tests. Could be drugs, no matter what she said. But that handprint told me it wasn’t.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I followed in the footsteps of the fat owner and moved to the back of the building, hoping for some clues or, if I was really lucky, a stone-drunk murderer ready to spill his confession. Those aforementioned bowels of the building, where all of the club’s real dirty work happened, were surprisingly sterile. It’s like the club had an enema, knowing I was about to show up. Flushed all the shit. Doorways lined a long hallway, portals to the  private rooms – to a heaven or hell (depending on who you ask) of sin, sex and spirits.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I poked my head through a couple of doors. Some were large rooms, meant for private parties. Others were nothing more than hole-in-the-wall closets, a bed and little else. Mirrors were popular among the clientele, it seemed. So was silk.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I found nothing of interest. They’d cleaned the rooms, and the victim had died in the main hall – dropped dead in the middle of a sweat-slicked crowd of dancers. If I hoped to learn anything, I needed to find the other girl, Missing Margaret. If she’d caught his eye, spent the night with him (or part of it), she might be just the evidence I was looking for.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I passed through the main hall. A crew had arrived to remove the body and I stopped briefly to speak with them. They had a good look at the hand-print when I showed it to them, but said nothing.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The body was done quickly, and I was finished with the club. I didn’t bid farewell on the way out, just left my card on the bar. The waitress and the fat owner weren’t around.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Time to find my main girl Margaret.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I stepped out of the unassuming doorway onto the street and squinted as sunshine washed over me. It was a cold morning in Prague and clear as you could ask for. A few steps down the sidewalk I bumped into another pedestrian, dark against the molten city.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I mumbled an apology and tried to step around him. He stepped into my way again, bumping into me this time. He said something in a language I couldn’t understand. Middle Eastern, maybe.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;He stepped into the shade of the building, still blocking my way. I could see him clearly now &#8212; He was tall, wearing sweats and an old baseball cap turned backwards. A lean body, the subtleties in the way he held himself whispered of easy confidence. Dangerous bravado. His eyes were golden, cold as the day. Breath plumed from his mouth, hiding a twisted smile.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“You poke your head in the wrong places,” he said, in thick-tongued Czech.</p>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Without another word, he lifted an arm and put a hand to my chest, fingers pressed lightly against my left breast.</p>
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<p><small>Copyright &copy; Aidan Moher, 2010</small></div>
<p><strong>Piss and Vinegar</strong> is a piece of short fiction written for the Creative Writing class I&#8217;m currently enrolled in. This class asks us to step outside of our comfort zone and write in genres we&#8217;re not familiar with. The first of these was Crime Fiction/Mystery. <strong>Piss and Vinegar</strong> is my answer to that.</p>
<p>To inspire myself, I wanted to tie the short fiction from this class into some of my larger WIPs, to give me a playground to discover some of the settings and characters that may come to play in novels down the road. <strong>Piss and Vinegar</strong> ties into my next project, a loose follow-up to <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> that takes place in the same universe, but features a whole new scenario and set of characters. One major player from this story plays an important role in that novel.</p>
<p>Due to the limited scope of the assignment (1,500<em>ish</em> words), I decided to work on character and scene setting, rather than trying to setup a proper beginning-middle-end story arc. Ambiguous ending? Yeah. Sorry &#8217;bout that. Tune in later to find out more about what happened to our surly detective and his mysterious assassin.</p>


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So that&#8217;s it, I can officially say I&#8217;ve done it, I&#8217;m not a quitter. A smidge under two-and-a-half years (2 years, 4 months, and 21ish days, to be exact), from the first typed word (&#8216;Bye&#8217;, if you&#8217;re curious) to the last (&#8216;Man&#8217;, again for you curious types) [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Two weeks ago, I finished writing my first novel.</p>
<p>So that&#8217;s it, I can officially say I&#8217;ve done it, I&#8217;m not a quitter. A smidge under two-and-a-half years (2 years, 4 months, and 21<em>ish</em> days, to be exact), from the first typed word (&#8216;Bye&#8217;, if you&#8217;re curious) to the last (&#8216;Man&#8217;, again for you curious types) and I&#8217;m still in bloody love with it. Sure, after a few edits and several read-throughs, it might lose some of that lovely new-car-smell, but right now I&#8217;m in that honeymoon period, and we&#8217;re very very much still in love.</p>
<p><a href="http://aidanmoher.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/through-bended-grass-by-aidan-moher.png"><img src="http://aidanmoher.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/through-bended-grass-by-aidan-moher.png" alt="Through Bended Grass, a fantasy by Aidan Moher" title="Through Bended Grass, a fantasy by Aidan Moher" width="530" height="174" class="center" style="border:none;" /></a></p>
<p><strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> is the story of Rowan Hayes, a young mother searching desperately for her son, violently stolen from her home by his Fey father. Dragged halfway across the globe, she is forced to the gritty streets and wondrous countryside of modern day Ireland, but soon finds herself embroiled in the mysterious, bastardized world of the Tuatha Dé Danann, the Fey folk of ancient legend, and exposed to a host of dangerous characters she thought only Fairy Tale. Rowan soon learns that her halfbreed son is purported to be the lynchpin in a mysterious war engulfing the Fey world, and threatening to spill into hers. Travelling through both our world and the alien landscape of the Fey, Rowan must face challenges both physical and spiritual to have any hope of ever seeing her son again.</p>
<p>Perhaps, though, it&#8217;s easier to sum <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> up with my submission to agent Colleen Lindsay&#8217;s <a href="http://theswivet.blogspot.com/2009/01/query-in-140-characters-or-less-contest.html">&#8216;Query in 140 Characters or Less&#8217;</a> contest, in which I was selected runner-up out of over 300 entries:</p>
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<p>LABYRINTH &#8211; (David Bowie and Muppets) + Fey mythology x The dirty streets of Ireland = THROUGH BENDED GRASS, a 90k contemporary Fantasy.</p>
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<p>I tend to think of <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> (when I&#8217;m thinking highly of myself, and feel like an ego-stroke) as Tad Williams&#8217; <strong>The War of the Flowers</strong> meets Mark Chadbourn&#8217;s <strong>The Age of Misrule</strong> by way of Neil Gaiman. I know, I know, setting the bar a little high, and if I become half the author those three are I&#8217;ll be lucky, but I wear those influences very clearly on my sleeve. They&#8217;ve been there since the beginning (well, except Chadbourn, I came to him late; but we must&#8217;ve been drinking from the same well, give some of the similar themes and mythology we work with) and their work made an indelible mark on <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong>.<br />
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It may be a total cliche, but <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> started life on a slow, summer afternoon while I was bored at work. At the time, I was working on outlining a huge Epic Fantasy trilogy, but knew somewhere deep down that I wasn&#8217;t ready to write it yet, that it was too big a story for me to tell before I better understood how to craft a novel. I still want to tell that story, even now, but at the time I needed something smaller, something more intimate. That boggy summer afternoon, I was shooting the shit over IM with <a href="http://www.shawncspeakman.com">Shawn Speakman</a>, blogger at <a href="http://www.suvudu.com">Suvudu</a> and an aspiring author like myself, and he mentioned that he was flirting around with an idea of writing an Urban Fantasy. My head was deep in my Epic Fantasy trilogy, but I mentioned that an Urban or Contemporary Fantasy was something I also wanted to tackle some day. I didn&#8217;t know anything about it, just that it would be set in Ireland, a country I&#8217;m familiar with and love dearly.</p>
<p>I spent the rest of that afternoon brushing up on Irish and Celtic mythology, diving deeper into the lore than I ever had in the past, and all of a sudden the story started forming in a nebulous, parasitic way in my mind. I had to get those ideas written down on paper, so I started jotting down random notes, not even plot, just random titbits of character and story, the nuts and bolts that would later be used to construct the plot. And then I just didn&#8217;t stop. I outlined rather heavily before <em>really</em> beginning to write, which is an important part of the process for me, and started blogging about my experiences writing the novel. <a href="http://www.aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword">Mightier than the Sword</a> may have tuckered out, but my passion for Rowan Hayes&#8217; story never did. A little over two years and 98k words later, I had a draft of a novel.</p>
<p>The story I leave behind is one that greatly reflects my value of family, and also my love of discovery and travel. Ostensibly, Rowan&#8217;s journey is a mad race to find her son, but it is also one of self-discovery and, well, discovering the world around her by being able to look at it in a way she never has before. The journey, as they say, is more important than the destination. As with any story, <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> grew greatly in the telling, and even I was surprised at some of the places the tale took our heroine. Perhaps most surprising, though, were the characters that jumped to the fore, supposed secondary characters that took on a life of their own and proved, in the end, vital to Rowan&#8217;s story. They&#8217;re all a reflection of a different piece of my personality, and damn if I won&#8217;t miss &#8216;em now that they&#8217;re gone.</p>
<p>What next? Edits. Then a bit of editing. Then, once that&#8217;s wrapped up, I&#8217;ll move on to doing edits. No, seriously, though, I plan to have a solid manuscript in hand by Spring of 2010, after I&#8217;ve spent some time away from the novel and received feedback from several of my early readers; after that it&#8217;s time to struggle with the dreaded query letter, then to the slush pile, where I&#8217;ll join the legion of other aspiring writers, hoping to catch the eye of an agent or editor.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t like to use <strong>A Dribble of Ink</strong> as a sounding board for myself as an aspiring writer, so you may not hear much more about <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> until I have major news on it (like finding that aforementioned agent/editor/schmuck-who-I&#8217;ve-coerced-into-publishing-my-novel). But if you&#8217;re interested in keeping track of the progress on my novel, and my unending attempt to become a published writer, you can always visit my other blog, <a href="http://www.aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword">Mightier than the Sword</a>, which I promise will see more activity now that the novel&#8217;s finished.</p>
<p>Writing <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> has been an experience that will leave a mark on me for the rest of my life. I always wondered whether I could write a novel, and now, looking back, it&#8217;s almost hard to believe that I did. It&#8217;s my baby, and it&#8217;ll be bloody hard to let her go, but man am I excited to set her free, toss her into to the wild where maybe, just maybe, she might bring someone just a small bit of the enjoyment and comfort she brought me. Then, it&#8217;s on to the next novel.</p>
<p><em><small>This article was cross-posted from <a href="http://www.aidanmoher.com/blog">A Dribble of Ink</a></small</em></p>


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		<title>It&#8217;s done.</title>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I finished <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> late last week. More to come soon.</p>


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		<title>Nearing the Finish Line</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 20:38:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It&#8217;s been a while since I last updated (despite any promises I may have made), but that doesn&#8217;t necessarily mean that progress on the novel has been equally quiet. In fact, it&#8217;s quite the opposite.Â For the first time since I started conceptualizing and writing Through Bended GrassÂ the finish line is firmly in sight. Of the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s been a while since I last updated (despite any promises I may have made), but that doesn&#8217;t necessarily mean that progress on the novel has been equally quiet. In fact, it&#8217;s quite the opposite.Â For the first time since I started conceptualizing and writing <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong>Â the finish line is firmly in sight. Of the 28 planned chapters, I&#8217;m currently working on Chapter 24 (currently untitled). Yeah, that&#8217;s close, only 4 more + and epilogue to go.To give you another perspective on how close the end is, the chapter I just wrapped up (Chapter 23) is titled, wait for it, <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong>. Generally, it&#8217;s safe to say that when a chapter shares a title with the novel itself, it&#8217;s probably an important one&#8230; and it&#8217;s no different here. Chapter 23 sees Rowan make a final pass from Ireland and back into the Fey world to confront her biggest challenge yet. </p>
<p>Through the whole novel, Rowan is desperately searching for her missing son, Lewis, and from Chapter 24 on her questions begin to be answered and, well, she&#8217;s not exactly going to like everything she hears.As you can probably guess, <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> (the chapter, not the book!) is the first time the title of the novel begins to make any sort of sense. Of course, I spread hints through the rest of the book, and one character in particular gives you a good glance (hah! pun not intended <img src='http://aidanmoher.com/mightierthanthesword/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> ) at the meaning, but it isn&#8217;t laid out before the reader until this chapter.</p>
<p>In fact, the scene where the meaning becomes clear, as Rowan passes back into the Fey world, is one of my favourite scenes in the novel, and one of the few times where I feel that the words on the page do justice to the vision I had in my head.I won&#8217;t lie, that chapter took me a long time to write, with many days staring at my computer screen and little progress at the end of my writing session. Still, I think all that time was well spent.</p>
<p>Of course, since the climax of the novel is approaching, there&#8217;s also a lot of action, some great revelations about the characters (if I can toot my own horn, of course) and a, hopefully, satisfyingly ragged ending. Rowan&#8217;s story isn&#8217;t always a happy one, it isn&#8217;t always a perfect one, but I do think it&#8217;s a compelling one. <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> ends here, with most everything wrapped up, but I have a feeling that Rowan, and other characters in the novel, aren&#8217;t quite done with me yet.Now, I&#8217;m not suggesting I&#8217;ll be writing another story about Rowan or the Fey world, in fact, I have another story brewing in my head that stars a new protagonist and takes place in Morocco/Japan, but I wouldn&#8217;t be surprised to see a few familiar faces popping up in the future.</p>
<p>You see, I&#8217;ve always been a fan of standalone stories that are bridged in little ways. Terry Brooks did a good job of this early in his career, with novels that stood well on their own for newcomers, but with just enough connections to past works to satisfy longtime readers. That all being said, it&#8217;s probably best to concentrate on finishing and selling <em>one</em> novel, before jumping into the deep end with sequels.</p>
<p>Speaking of selling the novel, at the suggestion of my good friend, <a href="http://www.shawnspeakman.com">Shawn Speakman</a>, my plan is to try to have a solid draft of <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> done by October. Why? Well, a huge writer&#8217;s conference happens in Surrey, BC every year and this time around Terry Brooks is attending, and, well, any advice and help I can get from a fellow like him would be a huge leap forward in actually seeing my manuscript turn into a published novel.In any case, I&#8217;ve still got a lot of work ahead of me&#8230; but I&#8217;m bloody eager to do it.</p>
<p>The end is in sight, now I&#8217;ve just got to get there.</p>


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		<title>Chapters 19 and 20</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Since coming back from my trip, and having to deal with the holidays, I&#8217;ve been struggling to fit writing back into my life. The book&#8217;s outlined, the stories there, screaming to get out on paper, but I just wasn&#8217;t giving myself the time to write. Then, on the advice of Cory Doctorow, I decided that [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Since coming back from my trip, and having to deal with the holidays, I&#8217;ve been struggling to fit writing back into my life. The book&#8217;s outlined, the stories there, screaming to get out on paper, but I just wasn&#8217;t giving myself the time to write. Then, on the advice of Cory Doctorow, I decided that instead of trying to eke out several solid hours a week to write a big chunk, I&#8217;d try to split the writing up over the course of the week. Afterall 5 sessions of 500 words is just as good as 1 session of 2500 words, right? Plus, it&#8217;s easier to find 30 minutes to an hour each day rather than trying to eke 4-5 hours in one big chunk.</p>
<p>Turning that corner was a bloody good idea, considering I&#8217;ve finished two chapters which brings me up to 20 out of 28 chapters. What&#8217;s that? Is the finish line in sight? Oh yeah.</p>
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<td><strong>Chapter One</strong>: 1,419<br />
<strong>Chapter Two</strong>: 2,123<br />
<strong>Chapter Three</strong>: 3,090<br />
<strong>Chapter Four</strong>: 1,944<br />
<strong>Interlude</strong>: 829<br />
<strong>Chapter Five</strong>: 3,164<br />
<strong>Chapter Six</strong>: 3,774<br />
<strong>Chapter Seven</strong>: 2,379<br />
<strong>Chapter Eight</strong>: 2,842<br />
<strong>Chapter Nine</strong>: 4,011<br />
<strong>Chapter Ten</strong>: 2,512</td>
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<td><strong>Chapter Eleven</strong>: 3,173<br />
<strong>Chapter Twelve</strong>: 5,309<br />
<strong>Chapter Thirteen</strong>: 3,528<br />
<strong>Chapter Fourteen</strong>: 2,964<br />
<strong>Interlude</strong>: 784<br />
<strong>Chapter Fifteen</strong>: 2,671<br />
<strong>Chapter Sixteen</strong>: 2,350<br />
<strong>Chapter Seventeen</strong>: 4,324<br />
<strong>Chapter Eighteen</strong>: 2,204<br />
<strong>Chapter Nineteen</strong>: 3,764<br />
<strong>Chapter Twenty</strong>: 2,148</td>
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<h3>Chapter 29: Lud, in the Mist</h3>
<p>This was the first chapter I wrote after a hiatus of a few months for travelling and the holidays. Frankly, I was amazed at how easily I got back in to the world and the heads of the characters. This chapter introduces two characters (well, one of them has shown up before, but this is where they both get their place in the spotlight) and they&#8217;re two of my favourite characters in the novel.</p>
<p>Not only do the two of them (a sort of Odd Couple-type, vigilante Faeries) give me a chance to have some fun with dialogue, but they&#8217;re very different types of characters than I&#8217;ve had the chance to write elsewhere in the novel. The two of them kick of a very important plot string that leads right up into the climax of the novel and are a major component in one of the first scenes that arrived fully formed when my novel was still in the dreaming phase.</p>
<p>To say I&#8217;ve been eager to write them, to truly meet them and get to know their characters, is a severe understatement.</p>
<h3>Chapter 20: Dust, Death and Sunshine</h3>
<p>This was an interesting chapter to right, if mostly for the drastic shift in tone from the beginning to the end of its relatively short length. It starts off an exploration of a part of the Fey world that Rowan doesn&#8217;t really realize exists and ends with a life and death battle with a face from her past. The two characters I mentioned from the previous chapter really get to shine here and strut there stuff.</p>
<p>A damn fun chapter to write.</p>


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		<title>Hey! I won, I won!</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Colleen Lindsay, an agent with FinePrint Literary Management and well known blogger, held a really fun contest over at her blog, The Swivet, recently that asked writers to post a query to the novel and Colleen would give the winner&#8217;s query and first chapter a serious look over.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Colleen Lindsay, an agent with <a href="http://www.fineprintlit.com/about/colleen_lindsay.php">FinePrint Literary Management</a> and well known blogger, held <a href="http://theswivet.blogspot.com/2009/01/query-in-140-characters-or-less-contest.html">a really fun contest over at her blog</a>, The Swivet, recently that asked writers to post a query to the novel and Colleen would give the winner&#8217;s query and first chapter a serious look over.</p>
<p>The catch? The query had to be 140 characters or under, <em>including</em> spaces and punctuation!</p>
<p>From her post:</p>
<p class="quote">First, can I just say? WOW! You guys really know how to rise to a challenge. And, boy howdy, did I ever give you a challenge: To come up with a great book query in 140 characters or less (the length of the average text message or Twitter post). The idea was to A.) have some fun and B.) see if I could get you all thinking about how to convey a clear story idea in a very concise way. And while it quickly became apparent to me that more than a few of you don&#8217;t seem to know how to count, the majority of you managed to keep within the contest guidelines very nicely. And a few of you managed to not only hook me with your wee tiny query, but you managed to do it with a unique voice.</p>
<p>There were a lot of great entries, some absolutely hilarious ones, and a few that kinda made me question whether the writer was actually communicating in the English language. But there were several real standouts for me.</p>
<p>The winning query:</p>
<p class="quote">What would YOU do if you realized all the kids on your baseball team were vampires? Explains the night practices! Little League Sucks, YA.</p>
<p>With well over 300 entries, everyone had their work cut out for them, so you can imagine how tickled I was when I saw the results and found myself in the <strong>Best of the Rest</strong>/Runner-up section among about 10 other queries picked!</p>
<p><strong>My Query:</strong></p>
<p class="quote">LABYRINTH &#8211; (David Bowie and Muppets) + Fey mythology x The dirty streets of Ireland = THROUGH BENDED GRASS, a 90k contemporary Fantasy.</p>
<p>The coolest thing of all is that, via Twitter, Colleen let me know that she&#8217;s interested in getting her hands on a realy query for <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong>! While it&#8217;s not a sure bet by any means, there&#8217;s nothing like encouragement like that to get someone motivated in finishing their novel!</p>
<p>So, can you pitch <em>your</em> novel in 140 characters?</p>


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		<title>At long last, my return.</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[First I must apologize to Mightier than the Sword, I certainly didn&#8217;t forget about you. I promise!
Second, to those of you who have stuck with me â€“ checking periodically in hopes that I might&#8217;ve returned from the ether to drop some hints about the progress of Through Bended Grass â€“ let me just say that [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First I must apologize to <strong>Mightier than the Sword</strong>, I certainly didn&#8217;t forget about you. I promise!</p>
<p>Second, to those of you who have stuck with me â€“ checking periodically in hopes that I might&#8217;ve returned from the ether to drop some hints about the progress of <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> â€“ let me just say that I have little excuse other than laziness, maybe. Actually, maybe that&#8217;s not entirely true, and I&#8217;ll explain why.</p>
<p>Last October I hopped on a plane, with nothing but my backpack and my girlfriend, and hit the roads (or rather, traintracks) of Eastern and Central Europe for a few months. The journey was fantastic and opened my eyes up to so many things that I had little appreciation for in the past. I&#8217;ve spent some time in Western Europe before and had little idea what I would find when in the other, underappreciated side of the continent. All I can say is that I was utterly blown away by the generosity and beautry of the people, the timeless, tragic history of the land and the utter decadance of the food  (and beer!).</p>
<p>The countries I visited were:</p>
<ul>
<li>Holland</li>
<li>Czech Republic</li>
<li>Slovakia</li>
<li>Poland</li>
<li>Hungary</li>
<li>Croatia</li>
<li>Slovenia</li>
<li>Austria</li>
<li>Italy</li>
<li>France</li>
</ul>
<p>Most importantly, however, were the plans that were to come after my travels, which included a several month hiatus in Ireland. For obvious reasons (my novel taking place in Ireland, for instance) this would be a big influence on bringing <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong> into the light. I&#8217;d spent a fair bit of time in Ireland a few years ago, but I was eager to get back and drop myself into some of the places that Rowan explores over the course of the novel.</p>
<p>Well, it didn&#8217;t turn out all as planned. The economy started collapsing almost as soon as I got to Europe and by the time I got to Ireland, getting a job and living there for a few months seemed like a tough task indeed. Plus I didn&#8217;t want to miss Christmas with the family! So, instead of a few months, we spent a few nights there and then headed back home, just in time for the holidays.</p>
<p>Being back in Ireland, and Dublin in particular, was a great way to re-immerse myself in the story and get another perspective of what the Irish way of life is like. Maybe it&#8217;s because I&#8217;m older, maybe it&#8217;s because I was in a different part of town, but I saw a harder edge to Dublin that I missed the first time I was there â€“ drunk bums, drugs, dirty streets, stag parties â€“ and I think that experience will enhance my story in a big way. Don&#8217;t get me wrong, all the wonderful things that first made me fall in love with Ireland were still there, but I was able to catch a glimpse at some of the seedier elements of city living that will help draw life into my version of Ireland in <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong>.</p>
<p>Enough about the travels, though, you probably want to know how the novel is coming along, eh? It&#8217;s coming along great and very slowly, all at once.</p>
<p>While overseas I had <em>a lot</em> of downtime, and that gave me a terrific opportunity to contemplate the story and how the final third (the unwritten portion) should unfold. To say that I had several epiphanies while there would be an understatement. Slowly, over the course of those two or so months, the entire story unfolded itself before me and by the time I was leaving Ireland I knew exactly how it should end.</p>
<p>Since returning I&#8217;ve outlined the story fully and now the real work begins in getting those final chapters down on paper so I can have a complete story to edit and, eventually, submit to publishers and agents. It&#8217;s crazy to think the finish line is finally in sight. Just the other day I sat down and began work on Chapter 19, and by golly did it feel bloody good to be back with Rowan after so many months of not being able to write.</p>
<p>The final break down is:</p>
<p>Prologue + <strong>28</strong> Chapters + <strong>3</strong> Interludes + Epilogue = <strong>Through Bended Grass</strong></p>
<p>Of course, this could always change, but I feel very confident that I have the story laid out properly and the fun stuff is all about to begin. I can&#8217;t wait to share it all with you.</p>
<p>Oh, and I promise I&#8217;ll be back to updating <strong>Mightier than the Sword</strong> more frequently now that the dam has burst!</p>


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