{"id":9676,"date":"2012-07-23T00:15:12","date_gmt":"2012-07-23T08:15:12","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/?p=9676"},"modified":"2012-09-09T11:52:06","modified_gmt":"2012-09-09T19:52:06","slug":"this-is-an-emergency-test-of-your-magic-system-by-josh-vogt","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/2012\/07\/articles\/this-is-an-emergency-test-of-your-magic-system-by-josh-vogt\/","title":{"rendered":"&#8220;This is an Emergency Test of Your Magic System&#8221; by Josh Vogt"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/emergency-test.jpg\" alt=\"&quot;This is an Emergency Test of Your Magic System&quot; by Josh Vogt - An image from MISTBORN: BIRTHRIGHT\" title=\"&quot;This is an Emergency Test of Your Magic System&quot; by Josh Vogt - An image from MISTBORN: BIRTHRIGHT\" width=\"648\" height=\"258\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-9681\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/emergency-test.jpg 648w, https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/emergency-test-300x119.jpg 300w, https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/emergency-test-500x199.jpg 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 648px) 100vw, 648px\" \/><br \/>\nCreating a new magic system isn\u2019t all that hard. Do I hear a few dissenters in the audience? For the sake of the next exercise, let\u2019s assume I do. Time to play a quick round of Magic Mad-libs! <\/p>\n<p>Fill in the blanks:<br \/>\n\u201cIn a(n) <u><em>adjective<\/em><\/u> world populated by <u><em>noun<\/em><\/u>, practitioners known as <u><em>made-up-word<\/em><\/u> can call upon <u><em>energy source<\/em><\/u> to fuel a form of <u><em>noun<\/em><\/u> magic.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>What\u2019d you come up with? In a forested world populated by squirrels, practitioners known as fuzzummoners can call upon mystical oak trees to fuel a form of acorn magic? Me too! Weird.<\/p>\n<p>Once a basic concept is pinned down, it\u2019s still not difficult to flesh out the system. There are so many types of magic systems swarming the shelves these days, they\u2019ve started to lump into familiar categories. Here are a few common approaches:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Beakers full of fairy dust<\/strong> \u2013 This is magic as science. The fuzzummoners exist within a universe that has an extra level or two of physics, with established rules that govern their acorn spell-casting. (Think pretty much any book by Brandon Sanderson.) Or the fuzzummoners have stumbled across mysterious, ancient\u2014possibly alien\u2014doohickeys that are so far beyond their comprehension it might as well be magic.<\/li>\n<li><strong>The mythology wood-chipper<\/strong> \u2013 Fuzzummoners are just one supernatural faction alongside Norse gods, dragons, trolls, vampires, and whatever else gets thrown into the mix for variety\u2019s sake. (Jim Butcher\u2019s Dresden Files series is a great example.) Bit of a magical free-for-all where anything goes (Also look at T.A. Pratt\u2019s Marla Mason series).<\/li>\n<li><strong>Is that a D20 in your pocket?<\/strong> \u2013The fuzzummoners magic originates from a roleplaying world with game mechanics complicated enough to boggle Jeopardy\u2019s Watson. Whether a tabletop or video game, the gameplay came first, the stories came later. (Look to the Pathfinders Tales series as a current example, plus plenty of other media tie-ins.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>If creating the magic system isn\u2019t hard, what\u2019s the difficult part then?<!--more--><\/p>\n<p><strong>Making the magic matter.<\/strong> Arcane acorn bombs and fire-wielding fluffy tails are all well and good, but if the reader never gets beyond the \u201cOh, that\u2019s kinda cool\u201d reaction, something is wrong.<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/gardens-of-the-moon2.jpg\" alt=\"Gardens of the Moon by Steven Erikson\" title=\"Gardens of the Moon by Steven Erikson\" width=\"262\" height=\"246\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-9689\" \/><\/p>\n<p>What, then, makes magic meaningful? It must be part of a tripod. No, not a War of the Worlds-style tripod. Let me clarify.<\/p>\n<p>There\u2019s a debate that pops up every so often in writerly circles. Which is more important to a novel: the plot or the characters? The answer, of course, is both (<em>argue that in the comments, if you want<\/em>). For fantasy novels, though, I submit that you\u2019ve got to add a third element. Which is more important: the plot, characters, or magic system? <\/p>\n<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/gardens-of-the-moon-1.jpg\" alt=\"Gardens of the Moon by Steven Erikson\" title=\"Gardens of the Moon by Steven Erikson\" width=\"648\" height=\"215\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-9687\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/gardens-of-the-moon-1.jpg 648w, https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/gardens-of-the-moon-1-300x99.jpg 300w, https:\/\/aidanmoher.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/gardens-of-the-moon-1-500x165.jpg 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 648px) 100vw, 648px\" \/>\n<p>All three must be equally invested in and reliant on each other; otherwise, you end up with an off-balanced or toppled tripod. When working on a novel, I ask myself a number of questions regarding the balance of characters\/plot\/magic. They usually run along these lines:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Is magic just a tool for the characters, or does it impact them on a deep mental, emotional, or spiritual level, fueling their growth and change throughout the story?<\/li>\n<li>How do the plot and characters affect the magic system? Does magic gain a \u201cpersonality\u201d of its own or offer its own internal landscape for readers to navigate?<\/li>\n<li>If the magic system substantially changed, would it impact the characters or plot, or would life go on its merry way unaffected?<\/li>\n<li>Could the events of the plot occur without any magic whatsoever? If so, why am I including magic in the first place?<\/li>\n<li>Do the magical elements basically comprise a mystical Rube Goldberg machine that exists just to force characters and events to end up where I want them?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>If these questions are truly taken into account and addressed, magic can become much more than just a few nifty ideas cobbled together. Readers can be engaged by the magic because it\u2019s intertwined with characters and events they care about, rather than sitting off in its own little corner, waiting to be called upon when the story demands.<\/p>\n<p>If not, though, a magic system can devolve into a handful of glitter and a few golden stars stuck to the page, able to catch the reader\u2019s eye but quickly revealed as little more than window dressing.<\/p>\n<p>And, call me crazy, but I think most readers prefer books that don\u2019t leave their clothes covered in glitter. My next guest post will research this vital issue further: Glitter-dispensing fantasy novels&#8230;yay or nay?<\/p>\n<p><em>This concludes the emergency test of your magic system.<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Creating a new magic system isn\u2019t all that hard. Do I hear a few dissenters in the audience? For the sake of the next exercise, let\u2019s assume I do. Time to play a quick round of Magic Mad-libs! 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